http://oneshotpoetry.blogspot.comElectro shock therapy.
Birthed me here.
My soul,
An arrow.
Here, I am free.
This shell,
Contains me,
Stuck in the walls
Like an arrow.
Longing for freedom,
To be shot from the bow,
Of my mind.
http://oneshotpoetry.blogspot.com
Nicely done. Look at you. Good job, except you need to confirm and or fix that your url works on the One Stop Poetry site. I don't think it does work. They can't get here from there. This is a good move to get readers. There is another site called Big Tent Poetry that I use. And another called Three Word Wednesday. Not everyone here uses the other sites. How I get my url to work, I make my posting and then ctrl-c the address in the url box above the post and ctrl-v it into the url box on the site. Doing it that way guarantees a working url.
ReplyDeleteThank you, I couldn't fix the link where my name is number 35 or 36 but in the bottom comment it is fixed. Such sticky little widgets these computer formulas are.....makes ceremony look easy. Now I know the ctrl C and V so will always remember them!!
ReplyDeleteI wonder if my poetry is too short and choppy but I like it. It is my style I am not following any formula.
To be shot from the bow,
ReplyDeleteOf my mind.
wow - what a great ending to your thought provoking poem...thanks for your comment on my blog as well..i'm an iPhone addict and think i could never exchange it for a droid...even if the camera is better..smiles
'electric shock therapy birthed me here'
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I agree with your interpretation of the arrow being the soul.
this piece is such a deep moving write.
A lot of feeling and emotions in your words
Perfectly done!
thank you
and thank you for following me
I am now following you
:)
Thanks all :D
ReplyDeleteSo far this one is by far my favorite. Such awesome photography!! Very Inspiring, wonderful muse.
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